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引用第6楼蕊命于2008-09-09 23:02发表的 2>Kq)Ii  
呵呵，不愧是蕊网文采最好的，道友强大啊 2>Kq)Ii  

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别这么说,真的,我真的不是,也没什么文采,不过乱写的,你这样谬赞,更让行家笑话我 2>Kq)Ii  
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